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The Farthest from Here by ~DemonAkela:iconDemonAkela:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


I want to fly, to move beyond
this place, the farthest I can be
from here. To experience a strange
way, to learn. I want to see
something new, to shake a new
hand, to see a new face. I feel
bound to this place I live, so many
ties holding me down. Faces of
everyday, routines methodical in
thier pace. Every dissapointment
something I cannot alter, cannot
control. I desire change, no more
of this static existence. I wish to
leave the path and lose myself.
I want to be the farthest from here.
©2006-2009 ~DemonAkela
:icondemonakela:

Author's Comments

This is how I have recently been feeling. Daily confusions and this and that are making me want to dissapear, though I know very well it would be the selfish thing to do. I just wish a could have the opportunity to get out and be me for a short while, no ties, no deadline, just me and those whom I cherish and love. No family...no expectations...










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:icontzrakz:
~Tzrakz Jul 16, 2006, 5:44:44 PM
Beautiful, meaningful work Cassi. I find your structure very different and refreshing. And I think many people can relate to the static feel of life, like it's one never ending cycle of the same. You seem to feel restrained, not being able to be the way you wish to be. I like your poetry Cassi. It's all very rich and deep in emotion and meaning. I love it :D

--
"what if everything around you
isn't quite as it seems?
what if all the world you think you know
is an elaborate dream?"~Trent Reznor & Nine Inch Nails

You may be stuck,
in a trial.
But I am here,
here,
to make you smile.
~Tzrakz
:icondemonakela:
~DemonAkela Jul 16, 2006, 5:56:18 PM
thank you tz, i really do appreciate it.:hug:

--
“The greatness of a nation and its moral progress can be judged by the way its animals are treated”~ Mahatma Gandhi
:iconmalichi:
~Malichi Jul 17, 2006, 7:04:46 PM
Im not going to be able to give the best critique seing as i havent typed for a few days, my hands are blistered, sunburned and sore and im reeeally tired but...Ill try.

Very good work babe, I know exactly how you feel. The world always seems to work so well with a schedule and timing but it gets so monotonus and boring that you need to do something out of the ordinary and fun for a change. I really wish that you and I could go on a roadtrip to somewhere for an unspecified amount of time but with parents and school looming close it wouldnt be possible. Love you.

--
Gott weiß ich will kein engel sein
:icondemonakela:
~DemonAkela Jul 17, 2006, 7:12:53 PM
love you too, and do not worry, we will get that roadtrip eventually:heart:

--
“The greatness of a nation and its moral progress can be judged by the way its animals are treated”~ Mahatma Gandhi
:icondemonichellsangel:
~demonichellsangel Jul 24, 2006, 11:10:34 AM
hey sweety, I loved your poem- so deep and outgoing. I don't know why but i found myself relating to you in many many ways when i read that... It TOUCHED me deep down inside and i feel like i'm finaly not the only one who thinks like that, thank you for that !!!!!!!!!!! anyway i gotta read your other stuff so i can finish replying to all of them... lol, ME :tears: :hug:
:icondemonakela:
~DemonAkela Jul 27, 2006, 10:24:14 AM
i love that poem, i think its my best:D

--
“The greatness of a nation and its moral progress can be judged by the way its animals are treated”~ Mahatma Gandhi
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